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| forgotten solider |
 Posted: Wed Apr 04, 2007 11:01 pm |
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Joined: 12 Mar 2007
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the apple fell far from the tree
landed in pain and missery
not much was over seen
it was a battle none the less
the pain is too much to confess
never gave into stress
one day the apple broke
and spread its seeds
the seeds grew into strong trees
as the strong fall
many more replace |
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| the roverandom |
| Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 8:59 pm |
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| i love this. i don't know why. critically speaking, it irks me. but it's so original, so simple and so deep and clear without explaining. i really like this one. the middle gets a bit emo, but the other parts are awesome. please title it? |
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