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| Oblivion |
 Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 5:43 pm |
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Joined: 11 Mar 2007
Posts: 81
Location: The Abyss
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Who am I now?
What caused me to change?
Where did I go wrong?
When did it happen?
Why didn't I see it before?
I am precisely who I am.
My life and fate has made me change.
I did not go wrong.
It happened a long time ago.
It was gradual.
Thats all I can be.
Now my will will change me back.
My decisions will be better.
Starting now.
Because I had an epiphany. |
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| the roverandom |
| Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 11:15 pm |
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Joined: 11 Mar 2007
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| nice. very honest. as a poem, it feels a little simplistic. a scenario, maybe? one which may not have happened, but through which you might be able to express yourself? birds are always nice. |
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