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| Oblivion |
 Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 3:13 pm |
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Site Admin
Joined: 11 Mar 2007
Posts: 81
Location: The Abyss
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To me you are a beauty queen
As pretty as the bird that sings
Upon the tall sequoia tree
Your voice to me all sweetness brings
My love for you is long and wide
As vast as any earthly sea
My patience must forever bide
Until you find the time for me
Your mind is like a horde of gold
That stretches long beyond my sight
The treasure that I long to hold
Yet could consume me with its might
What can I hope to find within
Besides the drive your love to win |
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| steve |
| Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 7:17 pm |
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Joined: 12 Mar 2007
Posts: 1
Location: p ville
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| dude, awesome poem, u r an awesome poet, you should let me and tim use one of the poems for a song, that would great, before we played it to an audience, we would give u recognition for it, but ne way, great poem, keep writing |
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